Chapter 22-23

I don’t think the ending of the story is happy or sad because it was just suddenly cut off. I was dissappointed to see it end like that. I would like to be able to know what happens to them, how Jonas’s old community reacted, if Jonas’s family got over his “loss” easily, and if they get a new receiver right away or not. Although, if I had to choose if it was a happy or sad ending, I would choose happy because Jonas and Gabe reached “Elsewhere”.

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3 responses to “Chapter 22-23

  1. At the end you should give a little more information on why because you said Jonas reached “elsewhere” you should give a little more information. But, overall its petty good ,good job.

  2. What do you mean?

  3. ALl i’m saying is that you should give a little more info but its pretty good.

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